You grew and grew, incited me to be unfaltering,
Made me inexorable and my dreams uncompromising.
You were not just a tree,
You were home for many and also my family.
You were my childhood friend,
I still remember swinging on an unused plank
which was tied to your hand.
Once a dog ran after me and I climbed on you,
He couldn’t do the same, I knew.
I plucked your flowers but you never grumbled
I drew on you, I teased you, I played on you but you never got annoyed, you remained humble.
But now where are you my big green friend?
I don’t know why they killed you. These murderers, I will never forgive them.
I sometimes go to the place where you once stood.
Reminiscing the memories of my childhood.
They say now that it is a beautiful place.
But all I can see is your grave.
Awesome poem Priyesh:)
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I hope You will see many more better then this soon 🙂
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Haha.. you know I got started 😉
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This one is really good👍👌
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Thanks 🙂
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Thanks for liking my work soo much 🙂 I will try to write better and better.
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Hey priyesh!your work is worth appreciation!ur work not only incite good vibes but also spread awareness towards society.this is indeed a good job!kudos!thanxx for sharing!
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:p well there can’t be a better compliment ‘miss kaur’ :p ..
Anyway thanks a lot :p
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Well.miss laitreen just loves ur work!
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Too many feels. It beautifully relates to my childhood. I miss trees.
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Yeah . Its a bitter truth that there are is a very significant decrease in no. Of trees
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There is *
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🌳🍃☀🌍🐬🐝😢💔 heartless humans …wonderful poam i loved it!!
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thanks jahida 🙂
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its really touching. This reminded me of a granny mango tree we had during my childhood which isn’t there anymore. Also it seemed some similarity of fondness which is usually visible in Ruskin Bond books 🙂 Good one.
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Haha.. we all who were born around 90s can relate ourselves because tree had cut in huge number in past decade.
And that’s a lot for your review 🙂
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🙂
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sad but unfortunately, our green friends suffer from ruthless human. very nice poem 🙂
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It will stop someday…
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When there will be no more left
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Wonderful. I can relate, childhood seems so far away.
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Thank you 🙂
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so beautiful. Mesmerising to be true. I LOVE NATURE & I LOVED THIS POEM. Caring for nature’s babies is so important now, more than ever. Do your part 😀 Keep writing.
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I will try my best 🙂
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